A pair of eagles living in the forest, deeply loves each other, married with 3 babies. Unfortunately, the male eagle has been killed fighting with a strong fox. The eagle mom needs to find the food by herself to support the lives of her young children. Sadly, children was ate by bears when she go out. The old eagle feel sad until one day she catches a little human. She feed the little child and he always eat all of the food, although the little human never make a sound and grow up. She may never know it is a LEGO toy and there is a kind girl took out all the food when the old eagle fly out.
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OK … we’re getting closer to 100 words with this one and the word count is steadily reducing: from 165, to 135 last entry, to 119 this entry. Keep going and you might actually hit the 100 mark!!!! 😉
Your story shows some good imagination and creativity, Jack. Well done.
For next time, please remember to get someone to read your post through for you – or even better, read it through yourself out loud and then make the necessary corrections. There are some unfortunate grammar mistakes in this and I’m sure that many of them you would have spotted for yourself if you have taken the time to edit carefully. Your writing shows great creativity and imagination, Jack, so you want to be sure that you are presenting it in the best way possible.
I do enjoy reading your stories, so keep going.
Mrs T